Sunday, October 16, 2011

ZIENN BUNNA ( KASHMIRI ) OR TIMBER STOCKING


                                                                 

ZIENN BUNNA ( KASHMIRI ) OR TIMBER STOCKING .

                                                                           
This is how timber is stocked( in open ) in kashmir .We call it Zien Bunna in kashmiri . This photograph was taken by me near sumbal sonawari....To this photo i add some lines from a Gazal of poet Amjad Islam Amjd

Bhatkey huve phirtey Hain Kayee lafz jo Dil mein,
Duniyaa ne Diyaa Waqt To Likheinge kissi din.
Aey Jaan Teri yaad ke Benaam parindhe ,
Shaakhon Pe meri dard Ki uttareinge kissi din.
Jaati hai kissi Jheel ke Geharayee kahaan Tak,
Aankhon me teri Doob Ke dekheinge Kissi Din.
Soyeinge teri Aankh ki Khalwat Me kissi raat,
Saaye me teri Zulf ke jaageinge kissi Din.

Khushboo ki tarah asl e saba khaak numaa se,
Galiyon se teri Shehar ki Guzareinge kissi din....

(Avtar Mota)


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Saturday, October 15, 2011

MANTO 'S SAUGANDHI


  

Sadat Hassan  Manto  (1912-1955 )



I have always said that Saadat Hassan Manto’s Character Saugandhi ( created by him for his story HATAK) brings simultaneous hatred and sympathy in hearts of millions of MANTO readers . Till this society exists Saugandhi shall exist . Manto's pen has immortalized  this Character . Poets like Shaharyaar ( Gyan Peeth Awardee ) Balraj Komal, Kumar Paashi, Sarmad Sehbayee   and many more writers have commented or written poems on this character .Manto has given total freedom to this Character to evolve itself and then attack the very society that created it.I treat Saugandhi's dog  as an important  character in Manto's story HATAK. Manto calls it Khaarish-Zadaa kutta that sleeps  in her filthy room. When Saugandhi attacks and throws out Madho ( Her Exploiter ) from her room , this dog too joins and helps her by barking and attacking Madho. 

In Manto's  story, Saugandhi is rejected by a mere “Ooun!” word spoken by a wealthy  Seth brought by a pimp . This' Ooun' word of the seth is like a sharp wound inflicted on  her psyche.  She is agitated .In anger and humiliation,  she starts looking around her existence . Can a woman be rejected merely by staring at her? Is she soul-lessobject? Is it a denial of her existence?  The humiliation goes deep down her soul exploding  the lie of love that her exploiter Madho has been keeping alive.



Manto was subjected to harsh criticism for this Character . To  his critics Manto said

“If you are Ignorant about existing time or the period that we live in then read my stories . If you do not tolerate my stories then this period is certainly beyond toleration. The bad things that exist in me have come to me from this period alone .There is no defect in my scripts .The defect that is attributed to me is possibly a system defect .Trust me I am not a trouble creator .I do not want to create fatality in thought process or emotions of people. How can a poor man like me undress this society or its culture and the tradition ? Isn’t this society already naked ? yes, I also do not make an effort to dress it and cover its nakedness as that is not my job. Many readers call me a writer with black ink. Surely I do not use black ink to write on black boards . I use white ink to write on black background so that every thing emerges more distinctly .This is my special style. I do not know what it is and I know that some people call it Progressive and some call it rubbish . God alone knows the labels that are given to my writings. Hell be the place for this Manto for he can not be even cursed properly by people . ”

Manto
 “ If there is no god then none can keep count of innumerable sufferings and pains of Saugandhi except Manto . In fact Manto has repaid a Debt to Humanity at large by writing her story .”

 Waris Alvi

I also add lines  from a poem of Noted urdu poet shaharyaar titled saugandhi

"Badhee bhari Yeh Bohriyaan,
Na jaane kaun Morh tak,
Hamaare saath jaayeingi ……………

Teri gali Mein har taraf
Se Aa rahein Hain Bhediye ,
Havaa bharaa Woh Chaand
Saat Inch neeche aa gayaa ,
Gizaa milegi Chyoontiyon Ko
Tera kaam ho gayaa ,
Hamaare naakhoonon Ki Maeil Se,
Tere Badan ke ghaav Bhar gaye ,
Yeh haadisaa bhi Ho Gayaa .
Magar Kahaan Se beech mein Yeh Aasmaan Aa Gayaa"
( Shaharyaar )

Kumar Paashi also wrote a poem on Saugandhi I quote some lines

“ Ikk mausam mere Dil ke andher ,
Ikk mausam mere Baahar ,
Ikk rastaa mere peechhe Bhaage ,
Ikk Rastaa Mere aage
Rastey beech me khadee akeli ,
Piyaa na sang saheli ,
Kyaa jaane mujh janam jalee ne ,
Kyaa apraadh kiyaa hai ,
Aakhir kyon Duniyaa kaa maine saara zehar Piya hai ,
Saari Umar na jaane kaise apney badhan mein Kisse Jiyaa hai ,
Mere saath zamaane tuune
Achhaa nahin kiyaa hai ”

 (Kumar Paashi )

Saugandhi the Bad woman . Saugandhi the kind and tender hearted  woman. Saugandhi the exploited . Saugandhi the lonely woman  .  Saugandhi the woman who has gone too far in her dull and aimless life  that she has lost  the distinction between Man and Dog. And a different  Saugandhi   who finally spits venom and fire  when she throws out her exploiter Madho.   


Saugandhi knows it that she leads a false life;  But then the the real life  has slipped far away from her hands. She knows she can't catch it up any more. How shall she fill up the loneliness and vacuum now? This question troubles readers of HATAK.



( Avtar Mota )

Thursday, September 1, 2011

" MY RELIGION " AN IMPRESSIVE BOOK BY MAHATMA GANDHI


                                                                                   
MAHATMA  GANDHI PLAYING WITH A CHILD .

Some days back , i read a beautiful and impressive Book " MY RELIGION  " by Mahatma Gandhi .  I liked  every line from the book . some lines that impressed me the most are hereunder for all to share and enjoy:


 1 "My austerities, fasting and prayers are, i know, of no value, if i rely upon them for reforming me. But they have an inestimable value, if they represent , as i hope they do, the yearnings of a soul striving to lay his weary head in the lap of his master"
“Under the new outlook , we shall cease to think of getting what we can, but we shall decline to receive what all cannot get.”

2 Strength does not come from physical capacity . It comes from an indomitable will. A small body of determined spirits fired by an unquenchable faith in their mission can alter the course of History ”



“How beautiful it would be , if all of us , young and old , men and women , devoted ourselves wholly to truth in all that we might do in our waking hours , whether working , eating , drinking or playing till dissolution of the body makes us one with the truth? God as truth has been for me a treasure beyond price ; may he be so to every one of us ” “As soon as we lose Moral basis , we cease to be religious . There is no such thing as religion overriding Morality . Man , for instance , can not be untruthful , cruel and incontinent and claim to have god on his side . ”

"Love never claims , it ever gives . Love ever suffers ,never revenges itself ."

5 “My non cooperation , though it is part of my creed , is a prelude to cooperation. My non cooperation is with the methods and systems , never with men .” 

                                                        AND 
6 "THE  HARDEST  HEART  AND  THE  GROSSEST  IGNORANCE  MUST  DISAPPEAR BEFORE  THE  RISING  SUN  OF  SUFFERING  WITHOUT  ANGER  AND  WITHOUT MALICE ."

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Friday, August 26, 2011

SEND A NEW PHYSICIAN TO HEAL OUR WOUNDS !!


                                                                                     
    kashmir Photo 2011


Me Beyee suyee Bonnei Baagun Hundh Hawaa Gotsch
Garan Andher Shureyun Hundh Ruut sadaa Gotsch
Amaa Kaaem Swarga Darruss Shaaf Deutmut
Hakeema Novv Taa Chhokh Balanukk Dawaa Gotsch.
( Arzan Dev Majboor )

Put me again in the coolness of those Chinar Gardens ,
To our Homes , Grant once more the noise of happy children .
Alas ! some one cursed this gateway to heaven ,
Send us a new physician to heal these wounds.                                                              




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MAJBOOR'S POETRY WITH A VIEW OF BADAAM VAARI GARDEN OF KASHMIR


                                                                          

BAADAAM VAARI GARDEN MARCH 2010 PHOTO AUTAR MOTA

Chhe Yaavunn Thaerr Taa Baavatch bal Chhe Mushkaan
Managuss Poshaa ! Diyaa! Kenh Chhumm Naa Baasaan.
Chhu Behtar Doorie Doorey Noor Chhaavunn
Chhanan Maa Posh Yeli Vothhee Vaav Toofaan.
( Arzan Dev Majboor )

This Youthful flower laden branch !
Drenched in perfume and Fragrant !
For sure I may be denied should I go near it and ask for a flower .
What else then but to be away and enjoy its grace ,
Alas ! these flowers may fall to dust , should a storm visit this garden


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Monday, August 22, 2011

A VIEW OF HAARI PARBAT FORT FROM BADAAM VAARI GARDEN KASHMIR


                                                                               



Autar Mota is sure that holding hands together , one day we shall sing these lines .
((Photo Autar Mota 2011)


Gaash Dapaan “He Bar Mutchraav ”
Bar Peith Pokk Beyee Sontukk Vaav .
Prathh Shakhsuss Az Lol Chhu Naav
Lassanukk Bassanukk Nov ChikChaav
Az Naa Chhe Paamai Az Naa chhe Graav.
Myon Marun Chhuy Oush Vothhraav.
(Autar Mota )


Declaring its arrival , sunlight knock at our door ,
Behold ! The spring Breeze too moves past Our dwellings .
Today every one is named as LOVE in this city ,
 what a new Zeal to live the life and be here ?
Love ! No Complaints today.
Love ! No Taunts today .
Love ! Listen ; " Wipe these tears now"





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Monday, August 15, 2011

SAFFRON FIELDS OF PAMPORE IN MARCH 2011: A VIEW AND A MINI POEM.


 To This view of Pampore  Plateau ( Saffron Fields )   I add a self composed quatrain. ( Four Line Poem )                                                                            


Vuddarich Fulayaa sontukk Vaavaa.
Thheikk Preichh Preichh He Aawaa Aawaa.
Kyaa Saa Kaaetie Chhivv Kar Feeriv Gharr,
Hoeum sinz paama Yem Sinz Graava.
( Avtar Mota )





The Blooming Plateaus and the delicate spring breeze ,
Feel tired asking every one " Did he come? Did he come?"
Where are you love ?When shall you return ?
One taunts while the other complains now .



( Avtar Mota )



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