(Photo Avtar Mota)
My Poem......"BAARISH" or RAIN..
The sky just poured down heat only. The fields had dried . So had the springs and streams . Hot winds blew all over . A Lonely sparrow felt emaciated with heat. But then the clouds appeared suddenly. Thunder and winds . The rain danced down wearing Ghungroos . Music was in the air . Leaves clapped in Happiness. Trees whistled joyfully .
""Lo! Here comes our darling rain""
And i add my Poem Baarish to these thoughts....
( Baarish )
Door Peid pe chidiyaa baithee
garmi se jhulsaayi re..
Taal talaiyaa sookh gaye sab
Loo chalti harjaayi re
Ab ke Rama Kheit jaleingay
Kya Garmi barsaayi re..
Haad ke Daanche na ban jaayein
kaisi bipidaa Aayi re..
Tabhi achanak badal Umdaa
Aandhi aayi Zsoon Zsoon Zsoon
Chhat khapreil hawa le bhaagi
Bijli Kaundhi Tad Tad Tad Tad
Aur achanak Goonghroo Baandh ke
barsa paani chhan chhan chhan
Paton ne taali maari hai
seeti baaji Hiss Hiss Hiss
Ghar Aangan mein Jal hi jal hai
Aao chidiya Fuur fuur fuur.
Galiyaan kooche behta paani
Sookhi dharti phir se dhaani
Naach utha hai
Bhoora bandhar
Haraa samandhar
Gopi chander
Bolo Machhali kitnaa Paani.........
( Avtar Mota )
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Autar!Baarish is an excellent example of poetic craftsmanship.Forebodings of drought preface the celebration mediated by thunder and black clouds.Simple and innocent words dressed up in grace and elegance.
ReplyDeletethanks Dear J P
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