Monday, September 23, 2013

MY POEM..TIPPY TIPPY TOP....... TIPPY TIPPY TOP



                                                                               


A RESIDENTIAL AREA IN GURGAON 
PHOTO AVTAR MOTA SEPTEMBER 2013.

Based on my regular  visits to Gurgaon  Haryana , I have scribbled some lines as my impressions .  I am now combining all these impressions together and  giving  them the  shape  of  a long poem in  5 segments . The opening  segment   of the poem is Titled DHOBI ( Washerman )  .   Dhobi is illiterate and is  from a village in Bihar  . He is young and  married and the need to earn a livelihood has driven him to this  far away city. His wife lives with his parents  in the village waiting, waiting and waiting .   And for knowing welfare  of the family back home , he is dependent on someone who can read his letters.


 This is a simple poem about the life that exists in this new   city of Skyscraper . I have used a  line from  my favourite  childhood  play song   “TIPPY TIPPY TOP ” in this poem . The poem is Titled   GURGAON . I am uploading  four   segments today.


GURGAON 

(1)
                                     
DHOBI ( WASHER MAN  )

Purshotam Dhobi Ghar Aayaa
Jaib Mein Biwi ka Khat Laaya

“ Sahib Issay Zaraa Pad Lena
Ghar Ka haal Hamein Kah Denaa ”

“Jo Paisa Tum Ne  Thhaa Bhejaa
Sab Ka sab Amma Ne Chheena
Hum To Baandhi Majdooran Hain
Sevaa Tyaag Hamaara Dhan Hai
Ram Saran Bhaiyaa Jab Aavay
Amma Ussay  Dakait Bataavay
Kab Aaogay Iss Lanka Mein
 Sita Karay Vilaap ”.......

Tippy Tippy Top
Tippy Tippy Top
What colour do you want
Tippy Tippy Top …………………

(2)

                                                                                

 MAZDOOR  ( LABOURER  )

Pandraah  Manzil Building Chhat se 
Rassi Baandh ke Koyee Latkay 
Deewaaron par Rang Chadaavay
Tab Jaa kar do Roti Khaavay 
Tapti Dhoop mein Pait Ke Kartab
Neechay Duniyaa ko Kyaa Matlab 
 Loongi Chadder Bottle Dubba 
Jhuggi Machchar Lotta Khattiyaa 
Zarda Khaini Beedi Thekaa
Jai Jai Jai Parbhu Teri Duniyaa
Iss Nagri Ka Guru Mantar Hai 
Apnaa Rasta Naap ....

Tippy Tippy Top
Tippy Tippy Top
What colour do you want
Tippy Tippy Top …………………

(3)

                                                    


NAUKRAANI...  ( MAID SERVANT  )

Yeh Bengal Bihar  se Aavay 
Salma Pushpa Naam Bataavay 
Kapday Bartan Jhaadu Poanchaa
Aur Sanbhalay Chhotaa Bachaa 
Lunch Dinner Breakfast Banaavay 
Sukh Baantay Tab Roti Khaavay 
Iss Ki Jhuggi Haal Niraala 
Daaru Mein Dhuut Hai Ghar- vaala 
Bachay Din Bhar Reit Mein Khelein
Nangay Paanv hain Kapday Meilay 
Bees Baras Mein Boodi ban Kar 
Kehtee Jeevan Shraap ........


Tippy Tippy Top
Tippy Tippy Top
What colour do you want
Tippy Tippy Top …………………

(4)

                                   



FLAT KI ZINDAGI  ( LIFE IN FLATS)

Bastay, Tiffin ,Dhoodh Aur Paper
Yoga ,Khabrein ,Toilet Shower
Lift Lagay Karnay Khaali Ghar
Cab Aa Gayee Khul Gaye Daftar
Aath Bajay Ghar Soona Khaali
Baat Reh Gayee Karnay Vaali
Ek Chhat Hai Aur Hai Ek Bistar
Dil Ki Baat Hai Dil Ke Andher
Builder Chheen Rahaa Khalihaan
Gamlon Mein Baagon Ki shaan
Paas hi Gaaon Ki Deewaron par
*Uplon Ki Hai Chhaap ....

Tippy Tippy Top
Tippy Tippy Top
What colour do you want
Tippy Tippy Top …………………

(5)

                                                                 

 NAYA  MAHANAGAR  ..( NEW  METROPOLITAN CITY  )

Thanday Thanday shopping Mall
Seedi Bhaagay Paanv sanbhaal 
Thandi Car hai Thanday  Daftar 
Baahar Barsay Aag Baraabar
Prawn ,Shawarma ,sea food ,Pizza 
Momo, Burger ,Noodle  ,Pasta 
Swami ji , Leader  Ya Builder 
Paisay Kaa saara Aadambar 
Night Partiyaan Drugs Aur Whiskey 
Sattaa ,Daulat ,Dandhaa, Kadki
Neta Ji Jalssay Mein Kartay 
Aadarshon kaa Jaap ...................


Tippy Tippy Top
Tippy Tippy Top
What colour do you want
Tippy Tippy Top …………………


( Avtar Mota 23.09.2013 )

* Uplay means cow dung cakes ..


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