Friday, January 26, 2024

BOOK REVIEW : "GANTANTRA MEIN GORAIYYA" BY M K SANTOSHI

                                                                  




 

                                                 BOOK REVIEW

 

GANTANTRA MEIN   GORAIYYA

(  Hindi poetry collection )

By Maharaj Krishen Santoshi

Published by Anamika Prakashan

ISBN:978-93-95966-00-9

Year of Publication 2023

Price ..Rs199/=

 

Maharaj Krishen Santoshi is a well-known Hindi poet and writer from the J&K UT. His poems and short stories have been published in many leading Hindi magazines in the country . Many have also been translated into various Indian languages including Telgu, Dogri , Punjabi, Gujarati , etc. He has published five poetic collections and a collection of short stories titled ,’Hamaare Ishwar Ko Tairana Nahin Aata” .Prof Arvind  Gigoo has also translated his poems in a collection titled, ‘The Chinar is My Address’. He has received many awards including the Best Book Award from J&K Academy of Art Culture and Languages .He has also been awarded ‘Sauhaardh Samaan’ by the Uttar Pradesh Hindi Society . He hails from Mattan town in the Kashmir valley and presently lives in Anand Nagar ,  Bohri ,Jammu.

 The present poetic collection under review is titled, ‘Gantantra Mein Goraiyya ‘. Published in 2023,the book comprises 89 poems spread over 104 pages .The poems are brief, crisp and deal  with existential predicaments apart from other subjects like exile ,memories of lost home, lost friends, life in camps, love, fear, parental memories, etc. Apart from this, there is a bunch of mini poems dedicated to Buddha written under the title, “Budh Ko Sambodhit Kavitaayein”.

  I believe good poetry flows out freely from the heart and it can never be an intellectual process. Born not in the mind but in the heart full of feelings and sensitivity, good poetry makes the reader exclaim with delight, “Yes, that's it! That's right!  Yes ,that is exactly how I feel! ”.In all the poems in this compilation, one comes across Santoshi’s intense observation and equally sensitive and uncomplicated presentation. Through these poems, Santoshi’s effort is to capture the essence of the chord struck in him by an instant of insight, in such a way that the same music sounds in the soul of the reader. That makes these poems readable, lovable and appreciable. Santoshi’s poetic canvas  is wide and he discusses many other issues through his poems apart from the exile that he painfully experiences. Through his poems, Santoshi also attempts to elucidate his own destiny. What interests the reader in the  ideas appearing in his poems  is their dramatic significance with reference  to the poet  himself. That also makes him come to some extent, closer to a few modern Kudish poets especially Kajal Ahmed and Abdullah Goran   . The emergence of modern Kurdish poetry marks a period of great significance in the history of Kurdish literature since it witnessed the advent of modernity, the rise of Kurdish nationalism, the fall of the Persian and Ottoman Empires, and the creation of the Middle East with no country for Kurds.The poems carry a sense of loss , pain ,an intense feeling of nostalgia and perpetual exile . Many exiled Kashmiri  poets like Santoshi also  feel and express similarly

 .I quote some samples from the  poems of Santoshi appearing in the book under review :-

 

(1)

 “Mitti ke devta

Kitne bhi pooje jaayein

Par woh darte hain

Baarish  se “………… (  A Mini Poem )

 

(However intensely

 You may worship

 Gods made of mud ,

Remember,

They fear a simple rainfall.)

 

(2)

 “Baarish mein bheeg rahi thi

woh stree,

aur mein khidki se dekh raha tha

uska badan

Budh !

mein kya karta

khidki bandh kar deta

tau bhi woh stree

mujh se aujhal nahin hoti.”  ( from …Buddh Ko Sambhodit Kavitaayein )

 

(The woman kept

Drenching in the rain,

And I kept looking

 at her body from my window.

My Lord ! My Buddha !

Tell me , what could I do ?

Had I shut the window,

still then,

that woman would not have

become invisible for me )

 

(4)

“O Ishwar ,

Ek baat poochhoon,

Hamaari vethaayein,

Hamaari praarthanaayein,

Kis daak ghar se pahunchati hogi aap tak

Meray  gaanv ka daakiya kahaa  kartaa  tha

Ishwar ke yahaan koyi daak-ghar nahin

Vahaan bus athaah shoonya hai

Jis ka koyi pincode nahin.”……..( From the poem ….Ishwar Ke Yahaan koyi Daak-ghar Nahin )

 

(  O God!

Should I ask a question ?

Through which post office,

Our painful stories ,

Our innumerable submissions ,

  get delivered to you ?  

The postman of my village used to tell me ,

“There is no post office  in God’s  town,

There is only infinite emptiness 

That has no pincode .)

 

(5)

“Aangan mein kunkuni dhoop ho

Havaaon mein pakay  huve sebon ki mehak

Aana tum

O mrityu ,

Dabochana nahin,

Jaise iss jeevan ne liya daboch ,

Chhoona ang ang

Jaise koyi kunti

Khayaalon hi khayaalon mein

Chhu rahi ho

Apne kisi karan ko “………( From the poem Mrityu )

 

 ( In the courtyard ,

 Let there be a  pleasant sunshine ,

Let the air be

 laden with  the fragrance  of ripe apple fruits ,

 Then come ,

Come,  O Death !

Visit me ,

Don’t pounce upon 

The way this life has seized me ,

Come ,

touch every part of my body

the way some Kunti ,

in the chain of her   dreams

keeps caressing her own Karan.)

 

(6)

 

“Yeh jo itna kuchh chhap raha hai kaagaz par

Kya bhula diya jaayega raddhi samajh kar

Kya naahak kaate gaye peid

Kya naahak padi gayi kitaabein

Kya naahak aadmi ne sapne dekhe

Ya

Jab tak rahegi bhaasha

Kaagaz iss duniya ko vishwaas dillaata rahega

Aksharon ko dohte dohte

Na kabhi thakeinge

Na kabhi raddhi hone se dareinge) ………( poem Kaagaz )

 

(These voluminous writings on paper

Shall the world forget this all like scrap ?

Then,

Were the trees cut without need ?

Were the books read without need ?

Did man engage in dreaming without a need ?

Or

Till the end of this world ,

The paper shall keep reminding  the human race

“ carrying these words day after day on my shoulders ,

I shall neither get  tired

Nor shall I be afraid of turning into scrap ,or waste )

 

To the lovers of good poetry, I recommend this book. Here is something fresh, readable and enjoyable.

 

( Avtar Mota )

 

 

 

 

 

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